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To all the new members of the forum in the introductions section. Bam! 16 counted posts right there! ?
 
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Wow, a lot of activity here! Welcome to the newly arrived floofs! ? ❤️

@caboose : I've read your story before some other work which had to be done.

Your story, which is written finely (in terms of the development of it) and with an interesting character building, is written quite well (in terms of writing style), the typos or grammar errors are (as far as I can analyze this as a non-native English speaker) ways below the common amounts in the story category, it offers an adequate spacing between the sentences and clear differing as to recognize the specific communication ways that are used. (y)

Only in regards of the free lines near the end (between the "picture send" notices as example) I would say that one is enough, it creates quite a big empty room which distracts from a smooth reading over multiple lines.


@Mare Lover 1975 : I can fully understand you. And if it were possible, I would smack the shit out over the internet lines of all those posting or praising such crap. Especially those participating in it - hours of smacking until they forget that they even are alive. ?‍♂️ I still feel unwell from analyzing it. Reading the initial thread I didn't assume that it would be this bad and continuing to get worse.
 
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@caboose : I've read your story before some other work which had to be done.

Your story, which is written finely (in terms of the development of it) and with an interesting character building, is written quite well (in terms of writing style), the typos or grammar errors are (as far as I can analyze this as a non-native English speaker) ways below the common amounts in the story category, it offers an adequate spacing between the sentences and clear differing as to recognize the specific communication ways that are used. (y)

Only in regards of the free lines near the end (between the "picture send" notices as example) I would say that one is enough, it creates quite a big empty room which distracts from a smooth reading over multiple lines.
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Thank you so much for the review. I hate how the formatting ended up I did my best to fix it but the spacing is still not how I would like. The Picture send replies were kinda designed to mimic how pictures would look like on a chat phone window. I was trying to dynamically space things in a way that tactile pulls you into the scene.

Thanks again for the review I really appreciate seeing how people feel about it.
 
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Mare Lover 1975 said:
.. was definitely such a time.
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Absolutely. How people don't see the distressed looks and tries to leave such a situation, that's shocking. Instead they like it. What the fuck.

caboose said:
.. There's alien technology in here and they are hiding it

I am convinced the tech is hidden in this thread
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Nah, I'm not participating that much in there, don't worry. :ROFLMAO:

caboose said:
Thanks again for the review I really appreciate seeing how people feel about it.
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Not a problem! The topic of "a young adult female human" doesn't interest me much, but regarding the story and what / how it happens is - even more compared to what mostly gets written on those story sub fora - realistic. As well as described in a neutral way - without an explicit focus on "erotic" ingredients. At least in this first chapter.

If you would want a grammar / spelling check, I saw a few small mistakes, but I don't think it's fair or necessary to throw them around, as they don't play a role in how well this story is readable.

And it is well readable, as such if you don't "need" to hear those from me, I'll just keep on ignoring them.
 
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Exactly.. due to consummating too much toxic stuff. :ROFLMAO: Chocolate is toxic even for humans, just their metabolization keeps it on acceptable levels.

But not only humans, as well those rodents which lived in their vicinity for at least 50.000 years+ and are specialized on stealing / eating whichever food the humans lay to waste or leave unlocked. Mice and rats have an astonishingly high metabolizing of theobromine.
 
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Radium Deuterium - you're writing about the weird TDF social experiments? I can only see it as a sort of experiment which actually includes the mods and admins.

Else there's no necessity to actually cause a dissonance between "clear rules", "free speech TDF" (even as "free speech" has limitations, that's for sure in regards of insults and hatemongering) and the poll.

After all.. the "burn it" voting option seems not to be meant in regards to the users, but for too off-topic waste disposal threads (regarding the forum main topics).

As such the whole "title" behavior could be concluded as a sort of "let's test if people which get a mainly negative title / rank without -any- positive effects or value would even accept, then love this title.. and how they would react / chose if there's the possibility to chose between a seemingly random ban of those with the title for a specific time or to give those useless titles up and vanish them beforehand".

And in that regard.. now.. let's say: it's weird in which aspects humans see value or meaning (and cling to). :ROFLMAO:
But I might be wrong. Who knows. ?‍♂️ Analytic fox analyzes.

At the end you're right with your posting. It's not exactly fair and has no reason or goal, which makes it arbitrary wasted time.

Now I'm off to bed. Wishing you floofs a good time - day, night, whatever.
 
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