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The Zeta Chronicles - A pro-active comic for the zoo community

ZTHorse said:
>Literally has only seen 5 pages.
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Writing a story is a lot like raising a child: If you fuck up the first few years, the rest will follow suit. Only a few, very skilled parents can fix things with their kids later in life, and you strike me as the type of parent to let your metaphorical kid drown in the bathtub.

If you don’t have the skill to do something as basic as writing a strong beginning that establishes likable characters, a solid, engaging plot, a major conflict and a complex tone, then you sure as hell don’t have the skill to develop the rest of your story. The whole “You didn’t read the whole thing so your opinion is invalid” take is a cheap cop out, and everyone knows it. Nobody had to finish “Cuties” to realize it was a movie that exploited children. I don’t have to finish your comic to see that it’s a failure. That’s the last I’m saying on this matter.
 
Narnia said:
Who is your target demographic? Antis? Furries?
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It's for furries. The survey they had up a while back was basically "how furry are you." Their ringleader for their pro zoo group was a cringy furry VRChat pedo. And now they're making a pointless comic that's going to be ignored by the mundanes and be taken down on any furry sites they attempt to post them for promoting zoophilia.

Honestly, they should have hired an editor and written a book filled with actually information on zoophilia and experiences from the community instead of commissioning a comic that lets someone have an ego stroke by being a mayor.
 
FeralLovin' said:
Honestly, they should have hired an editor and written a book filled with actually information on zoophilia and experiences from the community instead of commissioning a comic that lets someone have an ego stroke by being a mayor.
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Yeah, whatever happened to finishing the zoophile wiki? Been dead for a while. I feel like that would have been a much better use of ZV donations…but what do I know.
 
Narnia said:
Writing a story is a lot like raising a child: If you fuck up the first few years, the rest will follow suit. Only a few, very skilled parents can fix things with their kids later in life, and you strike me as the type of parent to let your metaphorical kid drown in the bathtub.

If you don’t have the skill to do something as basic as writing a strong beginning that establishes likable characters, a solid, engaging plot, a major conflict and a complex tone, then you sure as hell don’t have the skill to develop the rest of your story. The whole “You didn’t read the whole thing so your opinion is invalid” take is a cheap cop out, and everyone knows it. Nobody had to finish “Cuties” to realize it was a movie that exploited children. I don’t have to finish your comic to see that it’s a failure. That’s the last I’m saying on this matter.
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>literally has 5 posts on the forum

XD
 
FeralLovin' said:
Everything they do hits a dead end. The comic will be done, but I bet it'll only be posted in echo chambers and fade away from lack of actual attention.
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if that's true there's nothing to worry about then. Everybody makes is a bigger deal than its supposed to be.
 
RexAndMe said:
Is that your only argument against valid criticism?
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Of course. Because since I don’t run my mouth 24/7 that must mean I don’t have any clue what I’m talking about ?

You have two ears, two eyes, and one mouth. The wise ones keep their mouths shut and observe until it’s necessary to come out and chat. *Cough cough* Reconscope *cough cough*.
 
Narnia said:
Of course. Because since I don’t run my mouth 24/7 that must mean I don’t have any clue what I’m talking about ?

You have two ears, two eyes, and one mouth. The wise ones keep their mouths shut and observe until it’s necessary to come out and chat. *Cough cough* Reconscope *cough cough*.
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Well with what little you said, you left no doubt of your cluelessness.
 
Narnia said:
Of course. Because since I don’t run my mouth 24/7 that must mean I don’t have any clue what I’m talking about ?

You have two ears, two eyes, and one mouth. The wise ones keep their mouths shut and observe until it’s necessary to come out and chat. *Cough cough* Reconscope *cough cough*.
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I just get bored really easily
 
Reconscope said:
if that's true
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It is.
Reconscope said:
there's nothing to worry about then.
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And there is nothing to worry about since all of their ideas seem to have been schemed up after a day of finger painting and eating Elmores glue. This one won't end so hilariously like following an obvious pedo, but it will be mocked by anti-zoos, condemned by actual zoos, ignored by the people it's ment to win over, and eventually be forgotten when the minority of zoos supporting this kind of stuff hear about the next ding-dong that has a plan to win over the masses.
 
Any way you look at it, this puts the "Mess" in Messianic.
There's always been a better solution to the problem than this self-aggrandizing little attempt at saving us from the mundanes. The problem with any other solution is that our fearless leader didnt come up with it. Failure of Imagination, and an unwillingness to use the tools we have with the patience a ten-thousand year problem is going to require. Its possible this approach won't do much damage, but it isn't going to accomplish much either. The market that might bother to read such material isnt the people that would have to be swayed. The hip crowd and the comic fanciers of the world aren't activistas. They are the four-eyed geeks who got shoved in lockers at school( if they fit) and had their lunch money taken three days a week...only three so as not to discourage them into brown bagging. They won't spring into action over Spiderman, let alone over a furry comic with a vague moral.
The people who need to be brought into the fold are John and Mary Normal, God-fearing, Church-going, 2.3 kid, 2 car garage, Salt of the Earth citizens. Taxpaying Voters who want responsive Representatives from County to Senate....THOSE....the ones who have the most to lose by liberalizing their politics enough to accept us. Those....who worry about whats in the Milk, and what that chicken ate before THEY ate that chicken. Who might worry about whether someone added vitamin "cum" to that Burger, before it WAS a burger. Think theyre gonna read this thing? Think they wont beat the living PEE out of Johnny and Mary junior if they bring this crap home ( and John and Mary Sr actually read it?)....Think they'd risk the censure of their Church by letting the kids talk about it?

A second State, Idaho, passed a Texas-style anti- abortion bill monday. That has a lot to do with Politics, but also with a willingness to deny people the pursuit of happiness. The fine art of the pecksniff is alive and flourishing in the current Atmosphere, and it will be awhile before it gets better. Minding other people's business is an International Sport....and "Different" = Bad. There's a War going on that may well get bigger, and people are not immune to fear. Fear is contagious, and debilitating. But its also Mother Nature's way of saying "Don't Do That".
 
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